a few constructive feedbacks: 1. you can use pause to replace filler words (filler words refer to those uhhh sounds) 2. at 0:48 "around" Taiwan would be a better fit than "to" 3. it's hard for audience to engage if you keep looking at your screen (it would be better if you rehearse more before the final presentation)
You are so "unclear" XDDDDD.
ReplyDeleteYou still look handsome even if the quality of the video is bad .
ReplyDeletea few constructive feedbacks:
ReplyDelete1. you can use pause to replace filler words (filler words refer to those uhhh sounds)
2. at 0:48 "around" Taiwan would be a better fit than "to"
3. it's hard for audience to engage if you keep looking at your screen (it would be better if you rehearse more before the final presentation)
I am curious about your travel around the Taiwan on foot. However, you didn't talk a lot.
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